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Monday, April 12, 2010

BR 1-01: The Enormous Turnip

One day a old man got a seed. This story was made up of a seed and a old man. He put the seed in the ground and he raised a seed. It seed was turnip. The turnip grows and grows.

It turnip was big more than a old man. Then he wanted to eat the turnip. So the man pulls the turnip. But the turnip didn't move. He had helped from his wife however the turnip didn't move. He had helped from a boy, a girl. a dog, and a cat while the turnip didn't move also.

Finally he had helped from a mouse. When the turnip move slowly. At length he could pull the enormous turnip. After that they eat it, It was very delicious. It story is very friendly. Another time I think important
to help to each other.


[142 words]

1 comment:

  1. Hi! I'm yohei and one of the teaching assistants.
    Your review is good, so please keep writing!

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